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All righty, then. I need to have this done by Monday (what a deadline), so I need opinions. I'm drawing... well, you'll see the finished product, if I choose to finish it. The lineart is done; my question is - is the dragon head adequate? If not, I'll have to scrap most of the picture; not fun when the lineart was done in Photoshop with a mouse.

It's my first attempt at dragons (and at Photoshop), so be forewarned - it's pretty mediocre.



Dammit, I want a tablet!!

I would suggest you define the jaw a lil more. Right now it looks like it'll open like a bird beak. Push it back behind the eyes like a lizard for a more effective look.

Here's a lil doodle I made to get a better idea of what I'm talkin 'bout:

This post has been edited by Narratorway on 12th August 2006 08:12

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Personally, I think the face needn't be so scaly (at least make the scales more subtle). Otherwise, I think it looks fine .

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Quote (Narratorway @ 12th August 2006 08:09)

I would suggest you define the jaw a lil more. Right now it looks like it'll open like a bird beak. Push it back behind the eyes like a lizard for a more effective look.

Did just that. Thank you!

Still, that's pretty impressive, Nepheliad and Galsic. I can't imagine doing drawing
without some kind of vector-oriented interface, like Photoshop's cousin Illustrator.
But I see natural talent doesn't have similar limitations.

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