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Fanart: Vormav and Alma
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Posted: 9th July 2006 17:41
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It's Alma Beoulve from Final Fantasy Tactics, helpless in the clutches of the sinister Lucavi, Vormav! Can Ramza save her?
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Posted: 10th July 2006 12:43
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It's better than anything that I could do, but that isn't saying too much really.
 A lot of detail is needed for them, I think. Even in the medium and style that you chose, where detail is not as stressed as in others, the detail is lacking. -------------------- Join the Army, see the world, meet interesting people - and kill them. ~Pacifist Badge, 1978 |
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Posted: 10th July 2006 14:29
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To be honest, i really don't like that. It's really lacking in detail, and it seems like a piece of work that was done in about 10 minutes.
Sorry if that offends you, but that's just how it seems to me. |
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Posted: 11th July 2006 07:44
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In the vein of what the others mentioned (as far as detail goes), the only thing that indicates what's going on here is the dialogue. It took me forever to figure out that was his arm around her stomach. Without the text in there, it would look like he's either feeling her up or she's a bar wench doing a dance for him.
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