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Just a couple of things I did because I was bored.

Title: Siren
Size: 516 X 811 434KB
Comment: Tried something a little different with the face. I was trying to make her look a bit older than the characters I usually draw. I think I did okay with the subtle smile and the drowzy eye look. Overall its not that great but its okay.

Title: A Rage
Size: 780 X 719 509KB
Comment: Insert Monty Python joke. So I tried to make something kawaii. Guess I need to work on that. I applied a little effect to the image to give sort of a comic book print look. Go ahead...pet the bunny.

EDIT: The Siren pic loads with an error on the page in Internet Explorer, but it works fine with Firefox. Haven't a clue why. The bunny pic works fine in IE. Just another reason I don't use IE.

EDIT 2: I suppose I can just load the image onto the page. I'll give that a shot.
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Nope, doesn't seem to work. If anyone knows how to fix this let me know.


This post has been edited by Rujuken on 18th November 2005 18:39

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The Siren didn't load up for me for some reason but the bunny rabbit's cute enough. I'm not sure what your intention with its forepaws was, but they don't seem firmly planted on the ground. I guess it isn't a mistake so much as something I would have done differently, but, eh. Nifty way of making the pic, btw, sort of that technique used in newspapers or whatnot (I forget what it's actually called).

And, no, I ain't petting it...I get the feeling it might bite me hand off.

This post has been edited by Galsic on 18th November 2005 10:21

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Oh SNAP, that siren is jawesome! Bunny's cute too, but the girl just knocked me flat man. I think it's the hair.

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I don't get the thing about the rabbit (besides it being a killer rabbit that slays knights and stuff).

Don't take this the wrong way, but I can't help but think of my own work around the time when I was in high school (right down to the way you softly coloured it). It has nice composition, colouring, and a soothing mood (well, I guess so, since she is supposed to Siren!). This is something I would have really dug if I had seen this 8yrs ago.

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"Arthur Dent?"
"Yes."
"Arthur Philip Dent?"
"Yes."
"You're a total knee biter."

Nice.

SIREN: She looks great, except I don't think her facial expression would define her personality. She'd look better with an evil grin >=)

A RAGE: Umm.. It's good. I like the colouring and figure of it. But, A Rage's skin should be DARK RED, not LIGHT PINK.

Anyways, great job. Better than what I can do =P

I think Siren's legs are a little wierd. Other than that it's great.

Yeah, the bunny isn't great. Its just my attempt at making a cute little critter.

Don't worry Kame. You got all there was to get about the rabbit. Kind of let down to know I'm only as good as you were 8 years ago. Bleg...

This post has been edited by Rujuken on 30th November 2005 09:26

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Quote (Rujuken @ 30th November 2005 01:25)

Don't worry Kame. You got all there was to get about the rabbit. Kind of let down to know I'm only as good as you were 8 years ago. Bleg...

Well, you know, it's more of my style has changed. I don't usually do these type of things anymore and you know. Over the course of eight years, my anime style really has not improved ya know. It's pretty much stagnant since that's not where I focus my art now.

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kame, tortue, tortuga, schildkröte, tartaruga, turtle

"Arthur Dent?"
"Yes."
"Arthur Philip Dent?"
"Yes."
"You're a total knee biter."

Man, I've been wanting to see that siren for a while. It's part of the site's fanart gallery, so now I can, yay!

The coloring is probably the best part, here, although, for some reason, I'm really drawn to the face (actually, I think all your faces have the same charming style).

Minor complaint: the chest

Her body doesn't seem completely profile, yet the breast that's more visible does. I guess it's the way the top is draped over the breast (there ought to be more of a curve there, I think).

This might be a bit picky, but it bugged me, so...

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