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So old Locke's getting married,
Sabin remarked as he carried,
the marital present on his shoulder.
Though Locke couldn't have picked a day colder,
a warmer would not have been amiss,
and so thought Locke as he stole a kiss,
from his beautiful bride-to-be,
Ah, me, he sighed with obvious glee,
as she smiled and blushed,
with a such a flush,
of the likes he had never seen,
as she watched the procession very keen.

For all of his good friends were here,
From far Thamasa, and Figaro near,
to see of the boat on its maiden voyage,
that was Locke and Celes, with bundle and baggage.

Sabin came down from Mt.Kolts,
in the most normal of clothes,
which didn't bother Locke all too much,
as long as he kept Gau away from the lunch.

Cyan watched carefully for little Gau,
for the minute he was seen abound,
the pesk would scream thou, thou, thou!

There was Relm and Strago,
Setzer too, with Shadow,
in black of all hues.

Mog and Umaro were abound,
but Locke assumed they were around.

As Edgar and Sabin sat down,
Sabin passed a remark that made Edgar frown,
but the second quickly wiped it away,
and replaced it with a laugh as bright as day.

Terra shushed them all and gave the signal,
and so was to begin the wedding of Locke and Cecil,
er, I mean, Celes, she mumbled.

The bride came down the aisle, veiled in white,
and even Relm was silent at the perfect sight,
and she dearly wished she could paint a portrait,
but maybe after, said grandpa, drat it.

And so she stood to wait for her groom,
the man who was bold to wed her, entered the room.
His stride was confidant, his air to match,
that is, until something terrible came to hatch.

And so with large strides came the groom,
and in the silence there came a muffled thump that sounded like doom,
for the wedding, and it ended all silence,
for the groom, in his hurry, had tripped on his laces,
and lay flat on the floor, what a quaint little mess.

The bride moaned softly, for it had been only a matter of time,
until her bumbling groom destroyed the peace,
as surely as clock struck nine.

And an echo of the bride was heard throughout the spectators.
They had been expecting something grand,
but instead they had a groom flat on his face,
and a bride very close to tears.

But none could be said to be more gallant,
than Prince Sabin of Figaro,
as he hoisted up the fallen groom,
and said to get on the wedding.

And so the dazed groom walked up the aisle,
oh so careful of his laces.

So careful was he, that he completly disregarded,
the steps of marble, and unguarded,
fell to the floor.

A collective groan was heard, and
after that, only the singing of a bird.

A sob escaped the bride,
so distraught was she,
that the wedding go so horribly,
wrong in just a matter of seconds.

His face red, the treasure hunter,
got up and started ahead.
And so in conclusion,
a very short conclusion,

He takes the bride in his arms and says all right!
Tonight I take this bride, tonight to be my wife.
And so they kiss and so begins their marital bliss,

as cheers erupt from the onlookers,
so ends the strange marriage of Celes and Locke!

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The ninja alights on a rocky outcropping on Mount Koltz, surveying his territory. Satisfied he gets up, and starts his walk home expecting a signal from the desert of Figaro, but...

"Sabin Rene Figaro! Get your head out of the clouds and come home for dinner!! And get rid of that ninja outfit!"

How poetic! Very nice!

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It's written in an odd meter.... but I dig it. Probably because of my affinity for the subject matter as much as anything else... Still, I very much enjoyed reading it.

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and I thought I was expecting fanart. Well, it is a pretty good poetry, not bad.

Thank you so much for posting a reply! I know, the meter is a bit off, but thank you for commenting anyway!

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The ninja alights on a rocky outcropping on Mount Koltz, surveying his territory. Satisfied he gets up, and starts his walk home expecting a signal from the desert of Figaro, but...

"Sabin Rene Figaro! Get your head out of the clouds and come home for dinner!! And get rid of that ninja outfit!"

A very interesting story, and an equally interesting style. You never see many fanfic poems anymore.




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I fear my heart and fear my soul
Life goes on, it surely will,
Without me and I wonder:
Will I ever see light again?

Life goes on...

brilliant! i thought the laces part was very funny...great job.

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and I thought I was expecting fanart.

That's a great idea, maybe I'll try it!! Thanks!

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The ninja alights on a rocky outcropping on Mount Koltz, surveying his territory. Satisfied he gets up, and starts his walk home expecting a signal from the desert of Figaro, but...

"Sabin Rene Figaro! Get your head out of the clouds and come home for dinner!! And get rid of that ninja outfit!"