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Posted: 20th January 2005 05:51
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Possible spoilers: highlight to view Oh Lord, all that talk just to find out she had her period... XP This post has been edited by Zephir on 20th January 2005 05:51 -------------------- ~Status Report~ * Completed... Dragon's Head * Completed... Soldiers of the Empire: Disciples (release pending) * In Progress/Undecided... Of Love and Betrayal * Planning/Assembly... Where it all Began |
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Posted: 21st January 2005 05:17
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Posted: 21st January 2005 05:57
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Heheh, I never did understand why men always get uncomfortable when women start talking about periods.
 Good for an easy joke though. -_^ -------------------- ~Status Report~ * Completed... Dragon's Head * Completed... Soldiers of the Empire: Disciples (release pending) * In Progress/Undecided... Of Love and Betrayal * Planning/Assembly... Where it all Began |
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Posted: 18th May 2005 09:06
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Posted: 3rd June 2005 06:49
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Yeah, yeah, I'm late.
Wonderful story! Sure, a few mispellings and such, but overall an interesting read! I'm loving the art, as well it's to die for!  I really like it, interesting characters, cute nymph, and it kept a good lightheartedness. ^.^ Bravo! Edit Edit: I was tired last night when I wrote this. Its shallowness has bothered me since. Something you took so long to write and I took so long to read shouldn't be summed up in thirty seconds' worth of smilies, right? Right! I really like the ending of the world concept. I've never heard of that before, and it makes for interesting society reformation. 'Course, it also reminds me of Lord of the Flies, so I'm compelled to look for symbolism x.x I also think the battling was pretty realistic, that just sounds like a lot of kids would do if they got the opportunity! I also like the way the narrator (?) was a kid, and sounded like one. The way it's worded is really neat, 'n all. And the way you blend the fantasy-ish world of the forest with Charlie's world is pretty cool, too. I mean, they're both fantasy, but the more realistic stuff with the more whimsical stuff. Tho' I'm really not sure why he always wakes up outside the forest, I'm interested to know what happens in the forest! I love Cherry's picture the most! I love kids. ^.^ It's the cutest thing. And the nymph! This post has been edited by RelmArrowney on 3rd June 2005 13:06 -------------------- You're telling me that there's no hope. I'm telling you you're wrong. |
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Posted: 11th June 2005 07:29
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Posted: 14th June 2005 15:28
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I just started reading Oakeys late yesterday, and I just finished it (well not finished but y'know), and all I can say is WOW! The plot is definately good, that's for sure, but your writing skills are AMAZING! All the dialogue flows really smoothly, the scenes are descriptive, and it really sucks you in (heck, once I started, I read nonstop until I had to go somewhere).
DANG. I love writing, and I'm pretty good at it, too (always get 100s on my short stories at school!), but this is WAY better than anything I could write. Well, except for this one story... but that was short. Besides, I'm no good at writing these long novel-length stories (well I never tried, but I don't think I'd finish it). I just write short ones that are linked together episodically, if y'know what I mean. Keep up the good work! -------------------- The island bathes in the sun's bright rays Distant hills wear a shroud of grey A lonely breeze whispers in the trees Sole witness to history ICO-You were there- |
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Posted: 19th June 2005 18:17
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^.^ I like the last chapter, Cherry's so cute.
Spiffyness is write, you do have a good plot. I just noticed that! I like it. Makes me inspired to write. -------------------- You're telling me that there's no hope. I'm telling you you're wrong. |
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Posted: 20th June 2005 08:12
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Posted: 16th August 2005 08:38
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Posted: 24th August 2005 03:30
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Posted: 8th October 2005 08:48
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Posted: 14th December 2005 06:34
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Posted: 27th December 2005 02:13
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ahhhhh...comic with color. a step up.lol.
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Posted: 10th February 2006 07:17
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Posted: 4th April 2006 08:40
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Posted: 23rd May 2006 08:22
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Posted: 6th July 2006 22:53
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Posted: 17th August 2006 09:10
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Posted: 7th January 2007 21:28
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Post #140384
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Posted: 10th January 2007 08:42
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You have some real artistic talent. Hopefully some people in the right areas see it and get things moving for you. Sounds like a good story.
-------------------- Whoever appeals to the law against his fellow man is either a fool or a coward. Whoever cannot take care of himself without that law is both. For a wounded man shall say to his assailant. If I live I will kill you, if I die you are forgiven. Such is the rule of honor. |
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Posted: 25th July 2007 07:29
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So it's only been...what? The beginning of the year maybe since I last updated... No biggie right? It's still fresh in'it? It's still 'hip'. It's still 'happen'n'...right?
Alrighty, so here be 'de link to 'da story d'yar! This post has been edited by Narratorway on 25th July 2007 07:31 -------------------- |
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Posted: 25th July 2007 08:04
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you good artist. i enjoyed your work. very imaginitive and has a lot of depth
-------------------- "Death to Mystic Enemies" ~ Heckran "Say yer prayers Lynx! Not that they'll do you any good." ~ Schala "Kid" Zeal "Hold yer Seahorses" |
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