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The Sky was A Blur as the falcon Sped across the Horizon. He could not believe it. The very People he had once worked against were now his Only allies. He remembered back to that day . . .
"My magic has No effect!"
His Mind Skipped.
"Your Magic has no effect as I stand within this Field!"
A blur.
"There will be no one left to worship us . . ."
Then the falling came. He Blacked out at that point, The last thing he remembered was Seeing the blue ocean below him. He recalled waking up by a town he could not remember the name of. The world had already begun to change. All about him fish carcasses were littering the shore. He reached into his pocket and found A single piece of Magicite. A Bird Flashed before him, and New energy Was given to him. He wandered into the town and found he was in Albrook. He sought after the Artist who had commissioned to paint his portrait. It was Late night. He slipped a piece of paper Behind his Own mirror reflection. He had hated the painting, The Evil that had so radiated from his former self made him loath to accept it as real. He set out from the town to the north where he had seen the mountain.
Again his mind Skipped.
He began to remember Looking in the water inside a forest pool. The face that looked back was not that of his own. It was Hideously scarred. He knew of course his once Proud and Regal Garments were in tatters. A monster rushed by, and He remembered that he could Cast Spells. With the last of his energy he let a mighty flare loose. The behemoth was killed instantly. He fashioned him self a Face mask and Body Cloak from the remains of his former clothing and the Monsters rough hide. For Several months after that he wandered the earth. Taking rides where he would and stealing where he had to. One day he recalled being caught, and The Annoyed inn keeper Threw him into the ocean after Smashing his head.
His mind Was a blur.
The next thing he recalled was Waking up on a small island he had never seen. Next to him was a shard of magicite. From the minute he touched it he realized something was different. The only other inhabitants of the island he soon discovered were giant Worms that engulfed everything: Water, Trees, Rocks. At first he Avoided them. But one night as he slept he was Swept in. He found himself in a cave like place filled with Monsters that had been engulfed. A bold Leafer walked up to him and Attacked, at this point He found that he could attack back in the exact same manner.
His mind flashed again.
Then on that day...
He recalled hearing human footsteps, he looked up, And was surprised to see THEM. By then his garments had turned to less regal shades of red, yellow, and green through wear and tear. Suddenly before he knew what was happening he found himself talking to the returner scum. But that had been what seemed like a thousand years ago. The leader was the Smarmy thief who had seemed to have some sort of relationship with his general and slave witch. The witch was present with them as well. Along with the fool of Doma, and the turncoat king. The Thief began to explain their purpose to him. Suddenly he realized that they too sought to stop the clown. As much as he despised their very being his lust for revenge was to great. It was then he Turned back to reality and realized the Fool had asked,
"[I]And What dost thou call thine self?"
[/I]"Guh, Guh Geh"
Then it dawned upon him, he would never find acceptance as his self. The turncoat now spoke,
"Guh Geh?"
"er Gogo"
It had been the first thing that had popped to mind. He explained his mimicking skills quickly in an effort to get them to let him come along. To his surprise they did...
Another Flash passed his mind.
His hatred of them Was suppressed For the moment. His Want for the Clown Overtook him. He sat often times in quiet solitude in the airship. Then they came to Thamasa. He recognized the town immediately. He Himself had ordered the clown to torch it. Later that night he Could not sleep and by chance Walked the grave yard. The people HE had killed all suddenly seemed to Menace him. Although he could not see them he knew the were in the graves below. Leo..
The Tomb Was there as sudden as a magitek blast. Then he found himself crying. From that day he recalled giving it all up: Hate, Malice, Evil. But he never lost these feelings for him.
Now HE was destroyed. And He sat there on the deck of the falcon recalling how it had all happened. Gesthal felt a tear go down his cheek

This post has been edited by MogMaster on 20th February 2004 05:33

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If you've been mod-o-fied,
It's an illusion, and you're in-between.
Don't you be tarot-fied,
It's just alot of nothing, so what can it mean?
~Frank Zappa

Sins exist only for people who are on the Way or approaching the Way

That's really well written, MogMaster, except for a few tiny grammatical errors. You've really summed up well Gogo's inner turmoil if he really was Gestahl hiding his identity. Is that the full works, or is there going to be more?

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"Luck is my middle name. Mind you, my first name is Bad." - Rincewind

You can be as self-assertive as you like, just so long as you do what you’re told.” - Granny Weatherwax

"When Mr. Safety Catch Is Not On, Mister Crossbow Is Not Your Friend" - Sam Vimes to Detritus

More accoming Later. I would like to cover everyone.

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If you've been mod-o-fied,
It's an illusion, and you're in-between.
Don't you be tarot-fied,
It's just alot of nothing, so what can it mean?
~Frank Zappa

Sins exist only for people who are on the Way or approaching the Way

Unlike Iggy, I'm finding a large number of errors, in spelling, capitalisation, sentence fragments, all of which combine to make it almost impossible to read coherently.

If you're serious about submitting this, a lot of work is in order. I would suggest not moving on to any other characters until you get one story straightened out, myself.

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"To create something great, you need the means to make a lot of really bad crap." - Kevin Kelly

Why aren't you shopping AmaCoN?

Mog did a small dance of joy. The war was finally over and at last he could dance for the pleasure of it, not just for war. As he finished his little jig he noticed the other passengers aboard the Falcon. Celes and Locke were gazing deeply into each others eyes. Setzer of course was driving the ship. Terra seemed to be engaged with the view to the east “Mobliz” he thought. His pal Umaro was play fighting Cyan, Laughing as each blow was deflected by club or sword. GoGo was Sitting off in the corner, apparently deep in thought. Mog went downstairs. Inside Edgar lounged across the couch, as Gau ran around like a child, screaming for some dried meat. The party had already begun apparently for Strago Magus, who was stumbling stupidly about, knocking into this and that. Relm was too embarrassed to even look at her “Grandfather”. Sabin was talking to his sleeping brother about Figaro, and this or that, either oblivious to his sleeping, or just not caring.



planning to add more later im in school so...

This post has been edited by MogMaster on 23rd February 2004 19:34

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If you've been mod-o-fied,
It's an illusion, and you're in-between.
Don't you be tarot-fied,
It's just alot of nothing, so what can it mean?
~Frank Zappa

Sins exist only for people who are on the Way or approaching the Way