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"Our beau'iful Cap'n..." by Lockpick
 

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Lockpick
Posted: 6th May 2009 10:06
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Hi! Please see the deviant art version for more information. http://thegeminisage.deviantart.com/art/Ou...Cap-n-121609360

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http://www.cavesofnarshe.com/fanart/view.php?id=827
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Rujuken
Posted: 6th May 2009 12:15
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Pretty good overall. You did a good job of making it ambiguous as to what gender she is, which is probably the point.

Also did a good job of giving the hair texture. Speaking of texture the coat she wears seems too smooth. Small complaint though.
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supamariorpg
Posted: 18th August 2009 01:30
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Sorry if this is a bit nit-picky but if you make her a bit less vibrant, it would be a lot better. Other than that, it's amazing ^^
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