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Posted: 30th December 2007 11:02
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Posts: 4 Joined: 20/12/2007 |
This came out quite a bit better than I expected. Normally I can't draw to save my life.
![]() I haven't really done too much line cleaning on it yet. And it looks like I somehow missed the edges when cutting. Her skirt is shorter than it should be, she looks too long legged to me[not to mention the left leg is messed up], Her forearms are too short/skinny, and I really need to work on drawing hair. And yes I gave her a nose... that little detail always bugged me about FFT However, I at least can tell who it is supposed to be, so I guess that is a good thing! Anyways sometime in the next days I will either do another sketch or color/clean this one. |
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Posted: 6th January 2008 15:14
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Posts: 34 Joined: 17/6/2007 Awards:
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It's Agrias!
Let's see. I think her face would look better if the eyes were positioned a bit lower so that the lower lid is on the same level with the upper part of the nose. Also, you've given her a large chin, it's almost completely covering her neck and making the head look big in proportion to the body. Perhaps you could rub that bit out and make it a little shorter. Incidentally, I think the hair is one of its stronegr points; but it shouldn't be a the side of her head- that looks too girly, and Agrias isn't. I like her collar and her shoulder pads. But I'd say you need to work more on drawing anatomy. Her neck, shoulders, arms and the way she's holding her sword and shield look strange. Details aside, I like the sketch. It would be a good idea to re-draw it cleaner before colouring it in. If you really think you can't draw, you're mistaken. You just need to continue practicing. -------------------- Random game quote of the day: "Wilt thou change this world... Or wilt thou change thyself?" (Water Dragon, Chrono Cross) |
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