Posted: 30th June 2007 03:41
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(This is the second story I've done so I hope you enjoy. Btw, i've completed the first two parts and am almost done the third and final, maybe, but here they are)
The Blade pt.1 A man is walking, walking a long and hard road for his ultimate prize. He has seen many great people and places, Queen Victoria, the Wall of China, the Emperor of Japan, etc. His name is Myo, a warrior, twenty-nine years old, six feet one inch, with a long black cape, even darker hair, both his eyes different colors: blue for his left and green for his right, and a long white blade at his side, and he is on a quest for the legendary sword Ultima. A sword so great even the gods themselves worshiped it. Myo had once had a family, a loving wife and daughter about four years old, but they are now dead, because he went to get firewood, he was unable to protect his family from a pack of hungry wolves. He heard the screams and rushed back to his house, only to find his wife and daughter dead. So now Myo searches for this weapon, Ultima, only to protect people in danger. At this moment he heads to the Russian Empire, where he's heard the sword is kpet. After many days, he finally arrives at the gates of the Empire, but realizes going through the front door would attract too much attention, so he looks for another way in. He then sees an opening in the side wall and goes through that instead. As soon as he gets through, he sees a small boy, about eleven years old, getting beaten by one of the guards, then he sees blood and tears coming from the boy and realizes if he gets hit one more time...the boy will die. The guard makes for the final strike on the boy, when suddenly Myo shoves the boy out of the way and recieves the hit instead. "Who do you think you are?" the guard asks Myo as he draws out a sword. "That wasn't too bad. I thought it was going to hurt more than that" Myo says looking at the guard, ignoring both the attack the guard had just done and the sword pointed at him. "That was really weak", he says at the guard and starts laughing. "What's so funny?!" the guards asks angerly and charges Myo. "Guess it can't be changed. Oh well" Myo says, more seriously, and sighs. He then pulls out his sword and cuts the guard down. Before the guard knows what just happened, he spits blood and falls to the ground in two pieces. Myo cleans off the blood on his sword, with his cape, and puts it back at his side. Myo looks at the guard and realizes he's just a little younger than him and a bit shorter. He then realizes the boy is staring at him, surprised. Myo closes his eyes and smiles at him, briefly and walks onward to the Russian Palace of the Czar. The boy suddenly runs to catch up with Myo, "Thank you Mister for saving me back there. I thought I was gonna die". Myo briefly looks at the boy and says "If I hadn't shown up when I did...you would have". "But why did you save me Mister?". "Because I wanted to. And please stop calling me 'Mister'. My name is Myo". "Ok Myo. My name is Rassio" the boy says and keeps walking with Myo. For the next few minutes, they walk in silence. Rassio watches as people rush into their homes, and slightly peeking through their windows, watch the stranger walk on, but who could blame them? Even he thought Myo was different looking. Rassio decides to break the silence. "So why are you here anyways Myo?". "I'm here for the legendary sword, Ultima". After saying this he sees Rassio suddenly stop and gasps at what Myo says. He then rushes back to Myo and stands in his way. "What you're saying is madness! That sword is in the hands of the Czar himself and in order to get it, you'd have to beat him in a sword fight." Rassio says and slowly look at the ground. "No one has ever beat him. My father tried, but was killed. And then for laughs...the Czar killed my mother and big sister. He's a monster who has pushed us at deaths door, forcing us to pay too much for the smallest items!". Myo then sees him crying and continues on. "I don't want you to get killed to Myo!". Myo walks up to Rassio an places a hand on his shoulder. "Then that gives me more of a reason to get the sword. So that you and your town can live in peace." Myo says and smiles at him. "But why help us?" "For one reason" Myo says and sees Rassios' expression change. "I do it for Justice" and at that Rassio begins to smile. They then nod heads and walk on to the Palace entrance. "This is it" Myo says once the end up at the entrance. "Before we go in, I need you to promise me if things look bad you'll get away. Understand, Rassio?" Myo asks and Rassio nods his head. Myo then opens the doors an is greeted by hundreds of guards and soldiers, with their swords aimed at Myo and Rassio. Myo draws his sword and readys himself in case they attack. Suddenly the men move to two sides and get on one knee to make way for a man in a blue martial arts suit. "So this is the man who killed one of my men with little effort" the man says. "Welcome to the Russian Empire. I am the Czar and I have come to grant you...Death!" the Czar says and begins laughing. (Going to add second part tommorow but for now tell me wat you guys think) This post has been edited by tesco on 5th July 2007 23:15 -------------------- Kefka's Message of the week: Get off your couch noobs and get my new game Dissidia 012 |
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Posted: 1st July 2007 02:50
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(Well here it is second part. Yay!)
The Blade pt.2 A Farewell Myo looks around at the guards and realizes, this is going to be a fun day after all. He sees Rassio scared behind behind him, "Now this is what I meant before about danger. When I step forward, you run away and stay hidden, until it sounds like the fighting is over. Ok?" Myo whispers to Rassio. Rassio keeps staring at the Czar, with hate in his eyes, but nods and carefully takes a few steps backwards. The Czar makes for a dash at Rassio, but Myo cuts him off and says "Your fight will be with me." Myo then looks at Rassio "Go now!", and Rassio runs out through the doors. Myo steps backwards, but stands his ground. He then sees the Czar say something at him. "So, stranger, can you answer me a few questions before I kill you?". "Of course, but don't expect to kill me so easily after we're done talking". "Very well. Now what is your name?". "You can call me, Myo". "Alright, 'Myo', why have you to my palace? And how dare you oppose me?" the Czar says starting to become angery. "Never said I opposed you". "The why kill one of my men? the Czar says, becoming a slight calmer. "Because your men cause harm to the innocent people of yuor Empire. Because you disrespect everyone who is smaller than you. And because I made a promise to someone". "As you wish, but you still haven't answered my other question about why you're here?". "I'm here for the legendary blade, Ultima". Myo suddenly sees the Czars expression change and laugh again. He then snaps his fingers and a servent woman comes out of the crowd with a large box. She places it at his feet and rushes away. "The sword Ultima" the Czar says to his men and Myo, "A sword with no equal. A blade crafted by the gods and given to man as a gift". The Czar finishes his speech and reaches down at the box and pulls out a large blue blade, with ruby and emerald jewels in its hilt and a small inscription in the blade itself. He then aims it at Myo, and then suddenly at his men. The men see the evil smirk on their masters face and begin to run away. "Where do you think you're going?" he says aloud to them and charges them. He begins cutting them down, uncaring that they were loyal to him, every single one of them. Within moments, all the soldiers and guards lie on the ground dead. Myo shudders at what the Czar has just done. "You monster! They were your men and they did what you told them to do. And you kill them as if they are toys to you. You're not a man, you're a monster!" Myo shouts at the Czar, but he sees the Czar just grins at him. "You're right. They are just toys to me for my amusement. Now enough of this. Time for you to nid farewell to this world." the Czar says and dashes at Myo. Myo blocks the attack, but is pushed back towards the wall. Myo plants his feet and slowly stops the Czar. "How is it possible? No man has ever stopped me before". Myo starts walking forward and pushes the Czar back a few feet, but no futher. "You were wrong before about Ultima having no equal. In fact what I have here in my hands, is Ultimas' twin brother, Ragnarok. The holy sword." Myo says and jumps backwards and charges the Czar. The Czar is shocked and is unprepared for Myos' attack. Myo swings Ragnarok and cuts the Czar down. The Czar stands momentarily, but falls to the ground into two pieces when Myo puts away Ragnarok at his side. Myo walks over to the Czars dead body parts and grabs Ultima from his dead hands and walks away. He sees Rassio rush over to him after he leaves the entrance of the palace. Before Rassio says anything, Myo nods his head. Myo is soon greeted by an uproar of cheers from all the people who were enslaved by the Czar. He walks past them and heads to the gates, leaving them to have a party of celibration for their freedom. Rassio soon runs off to follow Myo and sees him standing at the gates looking at Rassio. "I wanted to thank you before you left Myo. To thank you for all the people here...and myself". Myo steps toward Rassio, "Now this is when you must live your life. To live on. Godbye Rassio". And with that Myo walks out of the Empire and leaves Rassio with a smile. Myo walks on with a thought in his mind...If his next stop will be just as exciting? To be continued.....or not? (Well that was the second part. Please tell me what you think and if I should continue on with Myos' life) -------------------- Kefka's Message of the week: Get off your couch noobs and get my new game Dissidia 012 |
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Posted: 5th July 2007 17:49
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(Well heres the anticipated part three, btw Changed title for three. going to be a part four and five and perhaps part six)
The Blade pt.3: Reunion "Well, all in all, I say that this was a most interesting quest. Defeated a Czar, freed an entire Empire of people, and to top it off got Ultima. I guess nobody stopped me and wanted the sword back, because I freed them, doesn't matter though. At least Rassio is alright." Myo says to himself as he gets halfway through a forest. He keeps walking, but hears a noise in one of the bushes, by him. He grabs Ultima off his back and quickly aims it at the bush. He slightly pokes at the thing in the bush and hears it yelp in slight pain. "Come out now or else" He says and sees a figure show itself. "And I thought we were friends?" the person says and Myo recognizes him immediately and puts away Ultima. "Rassio, what are doing following me?" Myo asks and Rassio walks up to him. "I want to go with you, but I didn't have the chance to ask you if I could, since you left and all" "So you follow me?" "I was gonna ask you. Honest. Besides I really want to go with you." Myo sighs and says "Well I guess I can't turn you away if you really want to come along". Myo then smiles and says "Besides I could use a companion. So I guess you can come, as long as you do what I tell you, alright?" "Yeah. Ok!" Rassio says with a smile and the two walk onward. They walk for what seems half-an-hour, but leave the forest a few minutes later. Myo then sees a sign which says "Maykinde City. One Mile". They walk onward heading to the City. Ten minutes later, they arrive at a huge festival in the City. "Wonder what's going on?" Myo says and sees a woman rush off with a sign. Myo quickly reads it and tell Rassio "Appears there's going to be a tournament tomorrow and anyone who wants to can participate. And the prize is: $50,000 in cash!" Myo heads off to a clothing shop and Rassio follows him. "First things first, we need to get you some better clothes" "I guess you're right. But shouldn't I bathe first? I'd just dirty the clothes" Rassio asks and sees Myo start to think. "Good point. We'll head to the Inn and you can get washed up there, besides we'll need a place to stay". So they head off to the Inn, instead and get a room. They enter the room and see two beds and a bathroom. Rassio heads to the bathroom first and takes a bath. He comes out a few minutes later looking fresh and new. "Well lets get going. We still need to get you some clothes Rassio" Myo says and they leave the room. They go back to the clothing store and get Rassio a green shirt and a pair of green shorts. "Looks like the festival is getting underway. Lets go join in". "Hey Myo?" "What is it, Rassio?" "Where did you get the money for my clothes and the room at the Inn?" "Well actually..." he lowers his head to Rassios ear, and finishes his sentence "I stole it from the body of the Czar after I killed him". He sees it doesn't phase Rassio and they join in with the rest of the people. Myo hears an announcer make a speech "So it is that we celebrate our twenty-seventh annual Battle Tournament!" the announcer says and the people make an uproar of cheers. "Now all participating combatants step forward please". Twenty-nine men step forward, a little older than Myo, and thirteen male teenagers, between sixteen to eighteen. Myo steps forward and presents his name to the announcer and the announcer writes it down. As soon as Myo walks back to Rassio, he sees a white hooded man, about the same age as Myo, present his name. "My name is Heim. No last name" he says and Myo shudders at the name. Heim hears him and turns around to walk back to his spot. While he does, he gives Myo an evil smile and then goes back to his spot. "What is it Myo?" Rassio asks when he sees Myos face. Myo doesn't hear him at first, but he sees Rassios worried face and says "Nothing. It's nothing". Rassio keeps looking at Myo for a minute and then over at the other man and sees him staring at Rassio. Rassio turns away quickly and listens to the announcer finish telling everyone about the tournament. "The tournament will be held tomorrow. Ten'o'clock sharp at the Stadium. Particpants, don't be late or you will be disqualified". After he finishes the crowd disperses and people go to their homes waiting in anticipation. Myo and rassio go back to the Inn and rest. Myo wakes up an hour later and gets dressed, taking Ragnarok with him, and goes outside to the Stadium. He goes inside and checks out the area and sees the places the audience can sit and watch the fighting. "Well I was beginning to think you wouldn't show Myo, or should I call you brother?" Myo turns around and draws Ragnarok. "I came to settle things. Once and for all" "Are you still mad about me killing mom and dad? Oh boo hoo. Too bad for you" Heim walks toward Myo but stops halfway. "I see you still have Ragnarok. Good. Cause I still have my sword. "You remember right? The same one that took away mom and dad, Halon, The Angels tear sword" Heim says and pulls out a long sword, similar to Ragnarok, except its blade is black. "Shall we? Myo dashes at Heim, but Heim dodges him. "You're still as slow as ever" Heim says taunting Myo. Myo starts to speed up. "What!?" Heim starts blocking the attacks. "So you have gotten a bit better, but you're still weak." Heim says and jumps backwards. "We'll continue this at tomorrows tournament. You better make the Finals. So long" Heim suddenly disappears. "Fine then. I will beat you tomorrow Heim. And avenge mom and dad." Myo says aloud and puts Ragnarok away and heads back to the Inn. (Well folks part three what you think. Next Time:2nd half Battle Royale Part 4:Change) This post has been edited by tesco on 10th July 2007 01:04 -------------------- Kefka's Message of the week: Get off your couch noobs and get my new game Dissidia 012 |
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Posted: 10th July 2007 17:57
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(Ok been a while but here it is part 4. Also with new title to parts 4,5,6)
Battle Royale pt.4: Change Myo wakes up from the sound of the festivities outside, and Rassios constant "Myo! Myo! You gotta come and see this!". Myo gets up and walks over to one of the windows and see the outside surroundings. In just the time he had been asleep, after his encounter with Heim last night, the people had set up even more decorations. He looks at the banners and the delicious looking food. "Hey Rassio?" Myo says drowsily "What time is it?" "That was the other reason I tried getting you up. You only have five minutes to get ready and make it to the stadium!" Rassio says quickly. "Are you serious? Then I better hurry up" Myo says and heads out the door, grabbing Ultima, but forgets Ragnarok. "Myo wait. You forgot...", but Myo is already running out of the Inn and rushing towards the stadium. Rassio grabs Ragnarok and runs after him. Myo makes it to the stadium gates and sees the rest of the participants entering through the doors. He runs over to the people and follows in after the next mperson. "Whew, and I almost didn't make it" Myo says and puts Ultima on his back. He reaches for Ragnarok, but realizes it's not there. "Oh snap! I forgot Ragnarok" Myo starts to head back, but realizes if he goes back, he'll be late. "I'll have to wait" he says and goes into the waiting area with the rest of the participants who are waiting for their chance to fight. He checks out the competition and sees, in one of the corners, Heim standing up and waiting as well. He looks over and sees Myo facing him. "Just wait brother. Soon we'll have some fun" Heim mouths the words as to not let the others hear him. Myo turns away and continues to look at the competition. Suddenly the gates to the stadium open and the combatants go worth. Myo hears a roar of cheers from the people in the stadium seats. He looks around and sees Rassio at one of the higher areas, but he sees Rassio wave to him and hold up Ragnarok. "Thank goodness he's got it" Myo mutters under his breathe. "Now we shall begin the first round of the tournament. Each particpant must battle one another. The victor of their match will move onward to the next round until, there are just two and that's when we will have our final match for the fantastic prize of $50,000. Now for the rules: the rules are simple, you must either knock your opponent out or kill them!" Myo gasps at this, but hears his brother laughing. "All the better for me", and Myo sees Heim hold tight onto his sword, Halon. Myo looks up and sees Rassios worried face, but Myos smile assures him it'll be alright. "Ok we will start the first round. Since there is an uneven amount of participants, we will be having a special event this year" Myo suddenly hears the doors close and lock behind him and sees the bared doors open up. "This year we will have 'special' guests help decide which 24 combatants will move onto round one of the tournament. "Now lets give a big welcome to our Gladiators". A group of gladiators slowly walk out of the bar doors, with blood-thirst look in their eyes. Some have scars across their faces, others wear heavy plated armors, but all of them share two things: they're giants and they weild giant axes as big as them. Myo quickly looks at his brother and sees Heim just loving the sight of the gladiators. "Begin!" the announcer shouts and the gladiators charge. "Good thing this stadium is so big, otherwise we'd be crowded in here like elephants in cages" Myo says and dodges one of the charging gladiators. Myo grabs Ultima and brings down the gladiator. He sees a few men and six teens cut to ribbons from the axes. Heim just dashes in between the fighters and the gladiators, cutting any in his way. Four men, three teens and eight gladiators fall from Heim and his sword Halon. He keeps looking and finally sees his target, Myo. Myo sees this and readies himself. Before Heim reaches Myo, three gladiators get in between them. "Hey move out of my way! I need to fight him" Myo and Heim say together and then are surprised at it. Within seconds, the men fall and Heim and Myo face each other. Both take aim at each other and then... "That's enough! We have our twenty-four warriors" The announcer says aloud to everyone and the fighting stops. Except for Myo and Heim. They stare each other down, Myo with the determined look of vengence and justice, while Heim with the look of inhuman pain for Myo. But Heim puts away his sword and walks off. Myo puts Ultima away and heads with the rest of the remaining fighters. "Congratulations warriors. You have overcome the gladiators and survived to the first round. Now the first round will start in one hour. Enough time to get cleaned up and get some food. Now be ready." The announcer dissapears behind a curtain. Myo heads out of the stadium and sees Rassio rush over to him. "Myo, I'm so glad to see you're alright. Thank goodness". They both walk over to a small table to sit down. "So Myo I have a question" "Yes, what is it?" "Well i've been wondering it since yesterday at the sign up. It's about that guy in the white hood, Heim. He looked like an ordinary guy. Black pants, black shirt, but I didn't see his face that well. But I saw your face when he said his name and you kind of shuddered a bit. Who is he?" "Alright I guess you should know who he is." Myo says and stares up at the sky. "His name is Heim, my brother, twin brother. And this is our story as kids... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Meanwhile, the announcer stands in a dark room. He turns a light on and looks at all the dead bodies of the people and gladiators who died. "This is perfect. With those two, my plan will be a success, and nobody will be able to stop me. Not even those two brothers". 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Posted: 13th July 2007 05:38
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(Tis part 5. The title pretty much gives it away for what happens)
Battle Royale pt.5: A Brothers Feud "We were boys and we were both...happy. We lived with our parents, and our baby sister. At that time, Heim and I were both 16 and my sister was 13" "I didn't know you had a brother, and sister. And at that, I didn't know that Heim guy was your brother" Rassio says and sees Myo still in deep thought and keeps quiet after that. "Heim was a good kid, always made sure me and Ralis were safe. Though he was the younger twin, he acted like the older. Ralis looked up to us. Said she wanted to be swordsmen like me, Heim, and father. "And she was quite pretty, as our sister, of course. I protected her against people who tried to have their way with her. Our home town, Millel, was a crazy place where there was little justice. She looked just like our mother. "Our mother was called Oullet and our father was OniCallin. We loved our mother so much, as did our father. Our mother had brown hair with beautiful green eyes, she always wore white dresses for our father, and she was a tall slender woman as well.. She didnt like fighting very much, but she always carried a bow with her, just in case. "My father was one of the greatest swordsmen around and he taught Heim and I everything he knew. He had grey hair, with brown eyes and would wear the same pair of clothes, even though mom hassled him all the time. He looked over us and had his eyes mainly set on one of us as his favorite, but he never said. Heim had green eyes with blondish-brownish hair, with a battle scar from a training accident on his left arm and Ralis was like a copy of our mother, looked just like her, except for her hair...her hair was blonde. "My father gave me and Heim his most treasured swords, he gave me Ragnarok" Myo stops for a second and finishes "and he gave Heim the sword Halon. He said they were swords his father gave him and his father before him and so on. It was the happiest time of our lives, until that 'day' came." Rassio sees Myo stop and a tear fall from his face. "That's when Heim thought he was the greatest fighter around, greater than father. He became mad with power and wanted anyone he thought would be a threat...dead. It happened when I went out for a walk after me and father had just finished sparring. I wanted to get washed up at the towns spring. "I heard screaming and shouting for help after I reached the spring. I ran back as soon as possible and found people lying on the ground, dead. I checked their pulses, but they were dead. Not a single man, woman, child or old person left alive. "The next thing I knew, I was heading towards my house. I needed to see if my family was alright. Within seconds, I was there. I saw right away that my father was fighting someone. "Before I could rush to help, the person cut my father down. I began to fill with rage and rush at the stranger, but then I recognized who it was. It was Heim, my brother, the one person I trusted the most. Regardless I ran at him, wanting to avenge my fathers death." Myo takes a breathe and continues. "He saw me and smiled. 'What so funny!' I yelled at him, but he just kept smiling. I attacked him with Ragnarok, but he dodged it with ease. I went for another attack, but he grabbed Ragnarok in midair and elbowed me in the stomach, knocking the air out of me. "Heim threw my sword at me, but didn't aim it to hit me, instead it landed at my feet. He walked past me and kept walking to head out of town. I wanted to run after him, but I instead went to see if Ralis and mother was ok. I went in my home and found my mother stabbed to death in the chest, and Ralis was nowhere to be found. "I thought she had gotten away, but found her in her room, dead too. She had tried to escape and was killed. I was weak and unable to save them." Myo wipes his tears away and gets up from his seat "Now I am his equal, or maybe more. Either way, one of us will die in this tournament and I intend to make it him." "What a touching story, Myo. Will there be an encore?". Myo hears Heims voice mock him from behind. "Such sentimental bullspit. You wanna know why I killed them?" "That's what I said before isn't it?" "It wasn't because I was mad with power. No, I killed them because they bored me. They all had hope and faith in their minds. Me on the other hand, couldn't stand it anymore. "And it was one wonderful time in my life." "You son of a...!" Myo starts to say but Rassio gets in between Heim and Myo. "I think you should go mister. You've over stayed your welcome with us" "Watch yourself boy. And you too Myo. We're gonna have one crazy match" Heim says and walks off. "We better get going Rassio. My hour's almost up". Both Myo and Rassio head back to the stadium, Rassio going back to his seat and Myo joining the other twenty-two participants and Heim. The door is then opened and a man walks in with a paper. "We will start the tournament now," he reads "and we have chosen you twenty-four fighters to fight one-on-one, until there is but two left. We have drawn at random and the first two fighters will be Heim and Korri Mesiit. Please go onward to the stadium fighting area". Heim walks out first, followed by Korri. Myo says to himself "That poor boy." and as soon as the cheers start, Heim comes back inside the waiting area. Myo sees the boy cut to pieces on the ground. People come out and carry off the remains. "Next will be" the man looks at the paper "Amano LuKin and Myo" Myo grabs his swords and walks out with Amano. Amano whispers to Myo "May the best man win" and he holds his hand out to Myo. Myo puts his hand out and shakes Amanos'. They both stand opposite from each other and listens to the crowds cheers and the announcer telling them to begin. Myo makes the first attack and dashes at Amano. Amano pulls out two small knives and blocks Myos attack. Amano reaches for an attack but Myo kicks one of his knives out of his hands. Amano hjumps back and pulls out another knife and throws the two. He keeps pulling out more and more. Myo moves out of range from them, but not before he get cut across the arm by one of the knives. Myo looks at his injury and then back at Amano. His eyes change from calm to filled with hate. His blood brings back the memories of his past. He sprints at Amano. Amano pulls out another knife, but Myo reaches him before he throws it. "Game over" Myo says and cuts Amanos head off. Myo calms down and sees what he's done "I'm sorry." he says and walks back to the waiting room. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- And so the fights begin ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- With Heim and Myo winning their battles. Heim kills his opponents with his evil smile and Halon, while Myo knocks out his opponents instead of killing them. "I have no intention of killing anyone else except for Heim" he says and defeats his opponents with ease. Of course he gets the occasional injury from some, but not serious. And then there were four: Myo, Kitanlin Kijifi, Moorge Baljus, and Heim. "We have now at last reached our final four. And so I congratulate them on this effort. Now we shall have the first two fight." The announcer says "Moorge Baljus vs. Heim". Heim steps forward from the waiting area, along with Moorge. Heim starts to grin, but quickly stops and draws Halon "I see you're not scared like the rest of those weaklings. Good. That means I can have some fun!" Heim says. Moorge pulls out a Falchion and readies himself. Heim takes a few steps forward and sees Moorge change stances. "Whats he planning?". Moorge jumps at Heim and aims for Heims throat. Heim bends backwards and Moorge misses. "Well he's smarter than he appears" Moorge says and keeps attacking Heim. Heim dodges the attacks but doesn't let his guard down. "This guy would probably, no, definately, kill me if I wasn't so fast" Heim mutters and finally drops his guard by accident. Heim barely avoids Moorges attack and gets cut across the chest. "Not a deep cut, but he still got me. I'm impressed. This guy may actually make me go all out, but not quite". Heim stands his ground and awaits the next attack. Moorge takes this opportunity and charges Heim. "It's now or never, Halon. Let's do this!" Heim shouts and charges at Moorge as well. Both rush past each other and cuts one another when they pass. Each stand up for a moment. Heim drops to one knee, and Moorge falls to the ground, bleeding to death. Heim slowly gets up and walks back to the waiting area. "I must say, that guy actually made me use part of my full strength. And for that I guess that's why I didn't kill him. Either way at least now I know i'll be in the finals now" Heim says and at this he smiles. "Now for the second semi-final match. Myo vs. Kitanlin Kijifi" the announcer says. "This is it" Myo says and takes both of his swords with him, just in case. Myo examines his opponent and sees his muscular figure. "Yeah i'm definately gonna need both swords." Myo stands across from Kitanlin and bows. Kitanlin pulls out from his pockets sharpened brass knuckles. "These are my weapons. And these will be your defeat Myo." he says and walks towards Myo. Myo grabs Ultima and runs at Kitanlin. He cuts Kitanlin across the arms and chest, but he doesn't even budge. Kitanlin grabs Myo and picks him up. He then throws Myo to the side. "If you wanna beat me, then you'll have to kill me. Otherwise, i'll kill you." he says and walks towards Myo again. "This isn't good. If he gets ahold of me again, then he may just kill me for real. If I have to kill him to move on, then I have no choice." Myo mutters under his breath and runs at Kitanlin again. "The same tactic? What a pity" he says and reaches for Myo again, but Myo jumps back and cuts Kitanlins right arm off in the process. Myo expects him to scream in pain, but he just keeps walking. "I guess I was wrong. You may actually be able to beat that man Heim." "I intend to do so. Now I we must end this. Please forgive me for this Kitanlin." "You are forgiven Myo" and Kitanlin throws his left hand into a fist and attacks Myo. Myo moves out of the way and cuts Kitanlin in half. "Good luck" he says before he dies. Myo stares at Kitanlins body and makes a prayer for it. "Thank you". ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Now we have at last our finalists. Myo, the dual-wielding swordsman vs. Heim, the insane man with bloodthirst in his eyes. Believe me folks when I say this is going to be one intense match." the announcer says and watches Heim and Myo stand opposite from each other waiting for the start. "And soon it'll be time for my ultimate prize. Their blood will complete my goal." he says to himself. "Well you've waited for this time Myo. So what do you say we give these people a fight they'll never forget?" Heim says, holding Halon over his shoulder. "Fine, but this match will be the end of our fued." Myo says holding Ragnarok pointing towards the ground. "So where's your other sword?" "I put it aside. Decided if i'm going to kill you, it's going to be by our fathers sword." "Very nice idea. So shall we begin?" "Let the Final Match begin!!" the announcer says and Myo and Heim clash at one another, trying to push the other back with their swords. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- But who will be the victor? And what does the announcer have planned? Find out in the final conclusion: Battle Royale pt.6: End of Battles ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (So what do you all think. I say i out did myself here lol. Anyways it'll be a few days before the conclusion is made. Enjoy) This post has been edited by tesco on 25th July 2007 02:32 -------------------- Kefka's Message of the week: Get off your couch noobs and get my new game Dissidia 012 |
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Wow, i'm not a good writer at all, so my idea and my comments may not count, but oh well. I think it's really good: how you described the characters, have a good story and background, and fight scenes that almost seem to be alive. You have good ideas, and I bet you could expand and write even greater things.
I'm also glad you decided to extend it, making it 6 parts instead of 3, unless 6 was the way it was in the beginning. Sorry if I was mistaken, i thought it was just going to be 3 of them, and then you changed to 6. Good job regardless. -------------------- Acts 2:38 Then Peter said unto them, Repent, and be baptized every one of you in the name of Jesus Chrsit for the remission of sins, and ye shall receive the gift of the Holy Ghost Acts 4:12 Matthew 28:19 Go ye therefore, and teach all nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Ghost |
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Thanks for the comment. Your the first person to comment on my story here. Anyways you guys will have to wait a day or two before I do a part 6 and all. Until then please enjoy wat i have at the moment
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(Friends, and other people who I don't really know who read my story, I thank you all for reading my story. And for having a big impact in how I made the story. So for all of you who have been patient...This is what you've been waiting for. The final chapter. Enjoy!!)
Battle Royale pt.6: End of Battles "Well I may have been mistaken to have not killed you when I had the chance. Had I known you'd have gotten this much stronger, then I wouldn't have spared your life, Myo" Heim says, as Myo begins to push him back. "I just didn't expect to have to actually try against you so early". Heim leans back a little and grabs Ragnaroks blade and pulls Myo closer to him. Myo kicks Heims' hand up and sends Ragnarok in the air. "Big mistake Myo. Now you're completely defenseless. Oh well...say goodbye brother!" Heim swings his sword at Myo, but Myo stands his ground, not backing away. Heims sword sticks partway in Myos shoulder. "Well that hurt a bit, but my plan worked" Myo says as he looks at his injury. "What plan?" Heims asks, as he starts to pull Halon out of Myos shoulder. "This plan!!" Myo says and holds onto Heims sword. Myo reaches his other hand out and looks up. Heim slowly looks up as well and sees something shiny in the air. He suddenly realizes what it is and tries to break away from Myos grip, but Myo holds tight. Ragnarok flies back down towards the ground. As it is heading into the ground, Myo grabs the handle and releases Heim. Heim tries to get a few feet back to defend himself, but Myo is already on his heels. Myo brings Ragnarok down on Heim. Heim falls backwards and lies on the ground. Blood begins to pour out of his chest. The crowd cheers at this and believes Myo to be the victor. "Don't play possum Heim. I know that attack wasn't enough to beat you", at this, the crowd stops cheering and remains quiet. "Clever, Myo" Heim says as he gets up. "You're right. That attack wasn't enough even to make me cry out in pain. But I must give you credit, for other than father, you're the first person who's ever injured me in battle. Congratulations". Heim prepares for his next attack. "Hey Myo. Do you know the difference in our strengths?" Heim says as he rushes at Myo. Myo blocks the attack, but slowly starts to be pushed back. "I draw my strength from my sword, always knowing that if I'm strong, then my sword will be strong. From what I've seen, you gain your strength from those you care about...like that boy." "You leave him out of this!" Myo says starting to become angry. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "This is turning out to be much better than I thought. It's almost time." The announcer calls over two bodyguards and whispers something into their ears. "Understand?" The two men nod and walk off in the shadows. "I will soon do what that Czar of Russia couldn't do. Take over the world!!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Myo sends Heim backwards and charges at him. "This is just like last night when we fought. He's getting faster, and stronger. What's going on with him?" Heim thinks to himself. He then looks into Myos eyes and sees the blood thirst. "I see now." Heim says to Myo. Myo doesn't hear him. All he can do is attack without hesitation. He jumps at Heim, but Heim side steps and avoids the attack. "Your anger is making you stronger, and causing you to not be able to control your body. Regardless, you aren't about to beat me Myo!" Heim says to Myo and, for the first time, Heim sighs. "Guess it can't be helped then. This will be our greatest battle ever Myo." Heim says and he starts to chant. "Oikan Taliy Mii Ranih Coriuy!!" Even though Myo has no control, his body still stops and sees Heim start to change. "You're the first to see my true strength Myo and apparently that is yours. Well enjoy brother." Heims chant causes his hair and eyes to change. His hair changes from its blondish-brown to white and his eyes change from green to blue. "You see I learned that chant from an old monk a few years back. He said I should only use it if I was fighting a worthy opponent. And you Myo...are the most worthy opponent there is." Heim suddenly disappears. Everyone in the crowds of people look around to find him, even the announcer can't figure out where Heim disappeared. Myo steps back a little and scans the arena with his eyes. He quickly turns around and blocks Heims attack. "What!? You can keep up with me?" "You bet little brother" Myo says with an evil grin. Both suddenly vanish. Only sparks can be seen from the hits. Every so often, the crowd can see a glimpse of them and then they vanish again. After a few minutes, there is only silence. Rassio suddenly gets up and tries to make his way down the arena. "I have to stop Myo, otherwise he'll end up getting killed" The two reappear and stand fifteen feet from one another and the crowd begins to cheer at their battle. Each having cuts across their bodies and blood pouring form their injuries. Both stare at each other, taking in deep breaths. Both Ragnarok and Halon are raised in the air and then pointed at each other. Rassio finally reaches the end of the rows of seats and tries to jump out into the battle but people hold him back, not wanting him to interrupt the battle "No!! Let me go. I have to help Myo", but the people ignore him and hold him back. Myo starts to hear Rassio, but his brothers face forces him to remember the battle. They both run at each other, with their swords ready to kill. Both reach each other and force their blades at one another. For an instant they both stand still. They look down and see Ragnarok inside Heim and Halon inside Myo. Heim slowly looks up and sees Myo staring at him. "Guess you finally beat me Myo" Heim says and falls backwards, pulling Halon out of Myo and Myo pulls Ragnarok out of Heim. The crowd remains quiet and lets go of Rassio. He rushes over to Myo, but Myo falls down as well. "Myo? Myo! Please don't die" Rassio says and begins to cry. "No need to cry Rassio" Myo says weakly and slowly opens his eyes. The blood thirst gone from them, instead his normal innocent eyes replace them. "Told you I'd beat him." "Well now I’ll be the judge of that" a voice says and Rassio sees the announcer walking towards them. He makes a hand gesture and calls over two men and they carry Myo and Heim off. "Where are you taking them!?" Rassio says to the announcer. "I'm taking them to get healed. Neither are dead, or are going to die any time soon. So relax" He then walks towards the seating area and tells the people "I will announce the winner in a little while so please be patient and wait." Rassio just stands there for a minute and heads back to the crowd, but then stops and hears a yelling coming from where the men took Myo and Heim. The announcer quickly runs to the door, but sees Myo, carrying Heim on his back walking out. "But how? You were supposed to have the mind controlling helmets on. How did you manage to fight back against my men, when clearly you're too banged up?" "Easy. Even though we are messed up pretty bad, your men were just too weak" Heim says aloud. "I see, but you're still going to help me with my dream either way." the announcer says and throws off his big coat. The people suddenly see his true appearance. He stands six foot three, with a red trench coat and brown pants, with a set of pistols in both hands. "I guess I'll have to force the helmets on you then." "Rassio get out here now! We'll take care of this guy" Myo says, barely standing. Rassio goes back up into the crowd and watches the fight. "Can you let me down now Myo?" Heim asks. "Oh sorry" Myo says and puts Heim down. "So what do you say Heim? Team up?" "What? You're joking right?" "Nope" Myo holds out his hand for Heim. "Fine, but only this time. Afterwards, we're going back to being enemies." And Heim takes Myos hand and gets up. They both grab their swords. "Now if you two are done talking, let's begin" The announcer says and starts shooting at them. Myo and Heim barely dodge the bullets, more worried about their current injuries. They charge at him and he keeps shooting. "Sorry if you wanted a longer fight, but you aren't worth the effort" Heim says. "Yeah, and this is for all the people who died in this tournament." Myo says. And both swing their sword at the announcer. "Wait can't we talk ab..." and he gets cut into three different pieces without finishing his sentence, and blood pours out onto the floor. Myo and Heim put their swords away and face each other. Then they stick thumbs up and collapse. "Rassio runs back to them and tells the people to get the doctors. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Heim!!" Myo wakes up and finds himself in one of the hospital beds. He sees his body bandaged and gets out of bed, getting dressed. He walks out of the room and sees Rassio sitting in a chair eating an apple. "Hey, where's Heim?" he asks and sees Rassios face lighten up with joy. "Myo I'm so glad to see you're ok. But you shouldn't be out of bed" "I'm fine. How long have I been asleep?" "For two days" and then he remembers Myos other question. "Heim left yesterday. He told me to tell you that he'd probably see you another day. And then he left. Didn't say where he was going." "Well I guess he's off to do some more training so when we meet again he might beat me". Rassio and Myo walk out of the hospital and goes back to the hotel. Myo grabs Ultima and they leave the city. They walk for about an hour and Myo says, "You know, I think we forgot something back there" "What do you mean?" Myo thinks for a minute and suddenly realizes what they forgot. "We forgot the prize money!!" "Oh yeah. Man that stinks" Rassio says and sits down for a minute. "All that work, and we don't even get the 50,000 dollars in cash. I think I'm gonna pass out now" Myo says and then passes out. "Myo! Hey wake up. Man gotta find some water. "Myo!" --------------------------------------- And so goes the story of Myo and his companion Rassio. Myo, the swordsman and Rassio, the orphan. What a crazy pair of friends. (Well that was the conclusion. I really hope you all like it. I put so much work into these and I hope you will all enjoy my story. Oh and please tell me if if its a good idea for a mini series) This post has been edited by tesco on 20th July 2007 20:10 -------------------- Kefka's Message of the week: Get off your couch noobs and get my new game Dissidia 012 |
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