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Posted: 2nd June 2007 08:00
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'A cynical brain
And a bleeding heart. They're in war, And its tearing me apart....' i know, its short what are those short peoms called again? i forgot This post has been edited by Cow_Of_The_Opera on 2nd June 2007 08:00 -------------------- delete me |
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Posted: 2nd June 2007 14:57
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Quote (Cow_Of_The_Opera @ 2nd June 2007 08:00) 'A cynical brain And a bleeding heart. They're in war, And its tearing me apart....' i know, its short what are those short peoms called again? i forgot do you mean Haiku? they need a specific amount of syllables |
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Posted: 2nd June 2007 15:12
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It's a quatrain. Four lines and a common rhyme scheme (ABCB).
But even though you have end rhymes in this poem, it doesn't flow at all because of your mismatched meter. I guess you could say you were going for some kind of rhyming free verse, but I hate most free verse so I won't say anything. -------------------- |
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Posted: 2nd June 2007 17:44
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i dont know why i posted this here
i beggining to hate forums... you always get negitive shit  -------------------- delete me |
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