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Posted: 12th December 2006 07:17
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Colors are brash and confusing, text is too small and theres too much of it. I could only stand to look at two, read half of one and I quit. I see very little thought put behind execution and that's fully evidenced by the fact that your using an image hosting site instead of a webcomic one.
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Posted: 12th December 2006 17:24
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Blatant spelling errors, eye watering art, and text that needs a magnifying glass to see.
For all of that, it's still better than anything I could produce. The single biggest flaw that I see is sadly not one that cleaner graphics or larger text or a spellchecker will fix. The comic just isn't funny. I'm sorry to say that, because you have obviously put alot of time and effort into these, but the story is uncompelling and humorless. -------------------- Join the Army, see the world, meet interesting people - and kill them. ~Pacifist Badge, 1978 |
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Posted: 12th December 2006 18:40
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I suck at making comics too. Well, I'm just saying that because I hardly even create things like that unless I have a really humorous joke and I bring it to life. I couldn't really pay too much attention to your comics. I can't stand seeing every random thrown over sprite in each panel any longer. Sorry, I just couldn't get into them too much, and you seriously need to just stick to one style of background because I keep seeing some RPGMaker 2000 tiles, then ones from a mario game (iirc). Try again.
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Posted: 16th December 2006 04:04
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Frankly, I'd read it if you put the images into the forum (there should be a way). I've made some pretty bad Sprite Comix myself (I personally think they get bad press. A lot of people CAN'T DRAW). A good sprite comic is good for a laugh (such as 8BT). There are a few others, such as Neglected Mario Characters (longest running Sprite Comic, although it lost its touch since the creator began persuing a real career).
If I had time, I'd make some sprite comics. -CSM -------------------- The NEW Final Fantasy Wiki! Join us! |
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Posted: 17th December 2006 02:18
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New one is up, and I do think I made some improvements over the past 2 years.
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