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Posted: 7th October 2005 01:48
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Preferred name: Josh Your email address: [email protected] URL: http://www-personal.k-state.edu/~jupdyke/ Media Used: I started with pencil and then inked with a pen. I scanned it into Photoshop 7 and then used that to color and edit the image. Filesize: 587 X 750 and 36.2 KB Well this is my first submision and am eager to hear so of your comments, so if you have something to say please do so. Thanks for your time. Josh   |
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Posted: 7th October 2005 02:20
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Hey Josh.
I think the concept behind the composition is cute, but the picture itself is a bit amateurish. It lacks the dynamic energy that you need to make an image appeal to the eye. You should consiter blocking out the basic shapes of the things you draw before fleshing them out. For instance, moogles have a vaguely peanut shaped head when viewed straight on, something that looks like was attempted in this pic, but not quite executed. Also, you should probably lower the eyes and nose, and perhaps make the nose bigger. (The ff9 style moogles have shnozes twice that big, I think, which is where this particular moogle looks like he came from.) It's cute, but it needs work. Keep at it!  -------------------- "Some fight for justice. Some fight for law . . . . . .Cecil, what will you fight for?" ~KluYa |
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Posted: 7th October 2005 05:04
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That's really cute.
 My only complaint is that you can't see the earphones in his ears. But that's not a big deal. -------------------- I had an old signature. Now I've changed it. |
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Posted: 7th October 2005 05:09
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I like it, it's nice and simple. Plus, Moogles rock!
....P.S. Elena99: I absolutely love your sig. |
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Posted: 10th October 2005 23:41
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Its a nice simple pic. You've got some light shading in there. Thats good.
As Elena said the ear phones don't look like they're in its ears. Only other thing I have a problem with is the little tuft of fur on its belly. Personally, I think that would look better on the moogle's chest.Other than that you've got a cute pic. Do moogles have padding on the bottoms of their feet? -------------------- -- You're Gonna Carry That Weight -- |
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Posted: 10th October 2005 23:49
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Though I'm getting tired of this i-Pod phase, this pic is good, there isn't much to say that hasn't been already done. Good job though
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Posted: 11th October 2005 01:49
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Posts: 3 Joined: 6/10/2005
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Thanks all for the posts. I appriciate the comments.
Josh This post has been edited by jupdyke on 11th October 2005 01:49 |
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