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This is a background i made from sprites i got from a DBZ rom. And i'd like to see what you think.


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"You know that feeling you get when you're on a merry go 'round, and you want to jump off to make the spinning stop, but you know it'll suck when you land? I feel like that all the time"- Keno

"I stab my girl until I fall down"
-Yukari
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There that should work.

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"You know that feeling you get when you're on a merry go 'round, and you want to jump off to make the spinning stop, but you know it'll suck when you land? I feel like that all the time"- Keno

"I stab my girl until I fall down"
-Yukari
Do you like Horny Bunnies?

Well, it looks like you altered the characters in some instances. Perhaps you should talk about that some. Its kinda hard to comment on something when not much of it is your original work.

As for the layout of the sprites the pic just seems kinda plain to me. I did notice the sprite that I think is Gohan has a Lobo behind him. Is that actually supposed to be Yamcha?

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Quote (Rujuken @ 23rd August 2005 23:29)

Well, it looks like you altered the characters in some instances. Perhaps you should talk about that some. Its kinda hard to comment on something when not much of it is your original work.

As for the layout of the sprites the pic just seems kinda plain to me. I did notice the sprite that I think is Gohan has a Lobo behind him. Is that actually supposed to be Yamcha?

Actoully a lot of it is my orignal work Yamcha Krillin and trunks or all custom sprites that i made. I scared them up a bit to try and make them look like they've been in battle for some time.

And i guess it does seem kind of plain with just black behind them. But i couldn't find anything big enough.

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"You know that feeling you get when you're on a merry go 'round, and you want to jump off to make the spinning stop, but you know it'll suck when you land? I feel like that all the time"- Keno

"I stab my girl until I fall down"
-Yukari
Do you like Horny Bunnies?

Ah, my mistake. Now that I think of it, those 3 you mentioned were not in the game. They are done very well. I thought they were just sprites from the game at first. Yamcha does look like Gohan to me though. But I suppose they would look rather similar when shrunk down to that size.

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Hmm.

Personally, I think it's way too cluttered and un-original/plain.

But, I don't mean to put down your artwork.

It's just...not my cup of tea, perhaps.

:3

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I picture the swaying vision
Of the reality of being real
You test me persistently
You get angry when I don't agree
You lose yourself
And I fall in love with you once again

Quote (No-Name @ 24th August 2005 01:04)

Actoully a lot of it is my orignal work Yamcha Krillin and trunks or all custom sprites that i made. I scared them up a bit to try and make them look like they've been in battle for some time.

I think what he meant was original material you drew yourself, not altered from an existing source. Adding a few red pixels here and there is pretty easy.

You should consider reducing the amount of sprites to have a smaller area. There's too much going on in that scene, and too much space is being used to illustrate it. That would solve your background problems.

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and the likelyhood of him sharing."

Quote (Silverlance @ 24th August 2005 07:10)

Quote (No-Name @ 24th August 2005 01:04)

Actoully a lot of it is my orignal work Yamcha Krillin and trunks or all custom sprites that i made. I scared them up a bit to try and make them look like they've been in battle for some time.

I think what he meant was original material you drew yourself, not altered from an existing source. Adding a few red pixels here and there is pretty easy.

You should consider reducing the amount of sprites to have a smaller area. There's too much going on in that scene, and too much space is being used to illustrate it. That would solve your background problems.

I'd have to agry with what you're saying you're right there Is way too much going on. The reason for that is i wanted to Really go all out on this one.

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"You know that feeling you get when you're on a merry go 'round, and you want to jump off to make the spinning stop, but you know it'll suck when you land? I feel like that all the time"- Keno

"I stab my girl until I fall down"
-Yukari
Do you like Horny Bunnies?