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Name: Locke Cole

Date: 8/5/05

Artist: Neo Ex-Death

E-mail: [email protected]

Medium Pencil

Artist Comments: I was tired of working on an rpg game last night, so I grabbed a piece of paper and felt like using up my last pencil to draw Locke.. I think he turned out to be pretty good.. I gotta buy more pencils

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http://www.geocities.com/shinrano26/Locke0001.JPG

Not bad :-)

A couple of crits:

- Elbows are a little bony and there seems to be a too much harsh definition on his arms. For that much definition, he should be bulkier, but Locke isn't bulky. He's skinny.

- Instead of the line on his neck, you may want to add shadow under his chin, and do some shadowing near the line to show where muscle/bone is.

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I had an old signature. Now I've changed it.

Thanks Elena.. I fixed the drawing.. But I'm going to scan it next week because the scanner at my library is open only on fridays..

Please submit it to the fanarts section.. I can't wait to see the ranking >:D

It's cute. There's something about the proportions of the head that bothers me, but I'm not an art critic--not with the way I draw.

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Veni, vidi, dormivi.

nice I like his expression lots.