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This is Relm. I think I made her look a little bit older than 10? Tell me what you think. Don't be afraid to be mean, I can take it.

Thanks Elena, that does help.

This post has been edited by Ashe on 17th July 2004 20:23

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She actually reminds me more of Sarah McDougal from Love Hina. Have you seen that anime?

Anyway, as a drawing, it's alright. She's a little slanted, her arms maybe a little too short, but not bad other than that. To make it look more like Relm, make her hair short (Relm's hair doesn't even brush her shoulders) with a few little curly bits, and add a small choker necklace. She also has random trinkets coming from the bandana and her hair, and a scarf that has ends that flow down her back.

Hope that helps :-)

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Its good, Ashe! way better that anything i can possibly do... im impressed. The only thing i find slightly off is the arms... they dont look quite right... but other than that its great!

This post has been edited by MarquisElmdor on 24th July 2004 05:28

Thanks MarquisElmdor . I'm not very good with hands or feet.

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No offense, it's a great picture.... but doesn't she look more like a teenager?

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I rather like the fact that she looks a bit older. There are lots of Relm arts, but none of a more matured Relm. Even if you didn't mean to exactly, its creative

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Quote (Elena99 @ 17th July 2004 13:08)

She actually reminds me more of Sarah McDougal from Love Hina.

Sarah McDougal? Hmm...I don't see it.

As already stated the arms and hands aren't the best. Just keep practicing, it takes a while to get it down. I still have trouble with limbs.

I think a way to make a character look younger is to make their face shorter vertically. And, of course, an adult character would have a longer face. It may not work out that way for others depending on their style, thats just what I've discovered.

I do like the designs on Relm's shirt and bandana. Its always a plus to invent something snazzy for your characters to wear.

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I like it, good job Ashe, I hope you can maybe color it, I rarely do see Relm Fanart in the S.S. Forum anyways, so god job!

Thanks for the comments. I really appreciate all of them.

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