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Oakeys
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Posted: 14th July 2004 06:14
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Alright, so I decided to 'publish' my story online at a site called FictionPress.com. Basically the originals works version of fanfiction.net. Point being that I'm deleting all the things I've written in these posts and will now just have this link and posts notifying everyone of any updates I've done.
And if by any chance, you're a fan of the art, don't worry. I'll keep them up. Now, without further ado: Oakeys By Neil Polenske Charlie. The main character and narrator.  This post has been edited by Narratorway on 3rd December 2006 17:17 -------------------- |
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Posted: 14th July 2004 06:19
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That's a very good beginning, even though we aren't too sure what going on. It sounds like a good opening. Gotta see more
-------------------- I fear my heart and fear my soul Life goes on, it surely will, Without me and I wonder: Will I ever see light again? Life goes on... |
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Posted: 14th July 2004 14:10
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I remember you talking about this story, I hope you manage to get4it in movie form and out where ehe public can get it :-)
Nice prologue. |
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Posted: 15th July 2004 03:34
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Posted: 15th July 2004 06:00
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I have a lot of trouble seeing where this is going, or how it connected to the start, but I'm sure we'll see in time.
As usual for you, the writing contains an odd sense of legitimate comedy - something which is sorely lacking in most things. -------------------- They are in love. **** the War. |
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Posted: 19th July 2004 03:17
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Posted: 20th July 2004 04:37
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Posted: 21st July 2004 00:01
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That's really strange and confsuing...
So, is that the prolgue, or what? -------------------- They are in love. **** the War. |
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Posted: 21st July 2004 05:49
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Posted: 21st July 2004 14:07
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I have been reading it, just hadn't caught up yet. :-) I love the pictures that you're adding in with it, by the way, helps me to picture it as the finished animation.
Since I just finished reading a novel with an end of the world scenario, there's one big thing that jumps up at me here; where are the animals? Birds, insects, animals of prey, rodents, former pets like dogs and cats? Are the kids in an area that isn't very wild to begin with, or did something happen to them too? I just wanted to point that out to you. :-) Otherwise, it looks great so far. I think Grizzle is actually my favourite character, not quite sure why. -------------------- I had an old signature. Now I've changed it. |
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Posted: 21st July 2004 23:12
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Posted: 5th August 2004 03:15
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Posted: 5th August 2004 17:45
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Wow! Your story is incredible! I hope it stays this good through the entire thing!
 -------------------- Quote -Captian of Sealab, Adultswim.Wow! I feel like a koala bear just crapped a rainbow in my mind! |
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Posted: 9th August 2004 07:28
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Posted: 10th August 2004 19:16
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Are you creating this as you go along or do you already have 20 other pages or so that you're just waiting to type?
-------------------- Quote -Captian of Sealab, Adultswim.Wow! I feel like a koala bear just crapped a rainbow in my mind! |
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Posted: 14th August 2004 04:29
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Posted: 14th August 2004 06:16
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I am really amazed by your artwork, you have a real talent there, how did you get so good?
-------------------- Adma <3 CoN |
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Posted: 17th August 2004 04:45
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Posted: 7th September 2004 01:03
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Posted: 11th September 2004 04:22
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Posted: 18th September 2004 02:07
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Aww man
 I liked the pictures. It was a way that I could imagine the story as if it were a movie. But, anyway, good job so far (: -------------------- Quote -Captian of Sealab, Adultswim.Wow! I feel like a koala bear just crapped a rainbow in my mind! |
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Posted: 18th September 2004 03:36
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Quote (Terra&BB @ 17th September 2004 21:07) Aww man I liked the pictures. It was a way that I could imagine the story as if it were a movie. But, anyway, good job so far (: Me, too... ;_; -------------------- ~Status Report~ * Completed... Dragon's Head * Completed... Soldiers of the Empire: Disciples (release pending) * In Progress/Undecided... Of Love and Betrayal * Planning/Assembly... Where it all Began |
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Posted: 19th September 2004 02:13
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VERY NICE. I didnt read your storys but they are probley cool too [ADHD, Sorry] Very good drawings. If you ever need some photoshop rendering done or whatever, let me know. Hope everything turns out
 -------------------- Game - Location ---------- Score FF -------- Got the Canoe --- B- FFII ------ That Pond -------- C+ FFIII ----- ... ----------------- N/A FFV ------ The N Zone ------- B+ FFVI ------ WOR ------------- A FFVII ----- The Gold Saucer- A+ FFVIII ---- COMPLETED ----- D- FFIX ------ COMPLETED ----- B+ FFT ------- COMPLETED ----- A |
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Posted: 19th September 2004 12:52
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I haven't caught up on what's been going on in the story in a while (I left off after the dream sequence part), but I will when I have time. From what I've read so far it's just plain amazing. Keep it up.
 -------------------- Words of Wisdom: If something can go wrong, it will. If anything simply cannot go wrong, it will anyway. If there is a possibility of several things going wrong, the one that will cause the most damage will be the one to go wrong. - Murphy’s Law Boing! Zoom! - Mr. Saturn |
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Posted: 20th September 2004 03:39
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Posted: 20th September 2004 04:57
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This is really good stuff. I love how all the dialogue flows so naturally, nothing awkward or out of the ordinary. And, the artwork is amazing, I really like the merchant for some reason
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Posted: 4th October 2004 06:43
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Posted: 29th December 2004 23:05
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Quote Then, can you please continue it? This aint gonna die. It may sleep for a while, but I aint gonna let it die dammit. Not again.  I can't help but ask. It's too gooood to stop it!! -------------------- Quote -Captian of Sealab, Adultswim.Wow! I feel like a koala bear just crapped a rainbow in my mind! |
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Post #68481
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Posted: 30th December 2004 05:14
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I know I know I know! God do I know...
I have been at this dambed chapter ever since I finished that last one...three months ago. I've done countless revisions at least five rewrites and I just started over again. Believe me, nobody's more frustrated about it than me. I would love nothing more than to give you a definite date as to when the next one's going up, but I gotta be honest it'll most likely be awhile. This one's a monster. Completely dialogue driven and there's a biggun of a plot point that's gotta be handled veeeeery delicately. The only solace I can provide is that I am still working on the story and I don't intend to quit anytime soon. Yeah yeah, but it's all I got, so you're just gonna hafta suffer.  -------------------- |
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Posted: 18th January 2005 08:55
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