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i don't claim to be a good writter by any stretch... alls i have is my imagination and a little bit of creativity.... and with it i created this.... the 3rd of 3 songs... feedback would be greatly appreciated (the reason this is the third song is because i don't have the first one typed up, and the second one is kinda oddish to me... maybe if people like this one i'll put the second one up)

One Miracle

V1
It's gotten to the point,
Where miracles mean everything to me.
But the things I've wished for,
And the things I've prayed for,
They never come to be.

Chorus 1
But then there was you,
You came into my life,
And you found your place so easily.
You smiled at me.
Now all I can think of,
Is that you are my one miracle.

V2
The lives are lost.
The friendships broken.
The souls forced,
into eternal wandering.
These things are so real to me.

Chorus 2
And then there was you.
You opened my eyes,
And you made me see what I couldn't see.
The thing i now see,
Couldn't possibly be,
But it's true,
Your my one miracle.

V3
Miracles don't happen too often.
Once in a lifetime I'm sure.
Miracles happen much less for me.
The reason? I'm not really sure.

Chorus 3
And then there was you.
You came in my life.
You opened my eyes.
You smiled at me.
And I realized what I couldn't see.

And the thing of it all.
The truth I now see,
Is that someone could love me.

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~ A Hero Is Someone Who Stands When Their Legs Are Gone~

I guess it's good, but I have a really hard time reading lyrics without any music to back it up, so I can't really tell what it sounds like... ^-^;

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~Status Report~

* Completed... Dragon's Head
* Completed... Soldiers of the Empire: Disciples (release pending)
* In Progress/Undecided... Of Love and Betrayal
* Planning/Assembly... Where it all Began

seconded. it seems like it'd be a great song if it just had some music. like Zeph said, it's hard to imagine what a song's like without a beat.

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moé in the streets, senpai in the sheets

Quote (Malevolence @ 18th July 2004 17:57)

it's hard to imagine what a song's like without a beat.

yup..... i kinda had an accoustic beat as i wrote it.... knowing that when i was done i would never remember it.... i'm thinking of having a friend compose some music for it....

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~ A Hero Is Someone Who Stands When Their Legs Are Gone~