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Rydia in Flash
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Posted: 25th June 2004 00:08
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Aight, these models are all leading somewhere. I've finished another, so according to the ideas we've been cooking for our toon, only two more models, then some assorted backgrounds and little stuff (*ahem*Tonberry*ahem*), then I can start on animation.
Rydia's Flash model Please bear in mind, this is only a model, used for animation. There's no cool pose, just a nice drawing that's created in sections that I can animate. Criticize/criticize, please. I mean, comment/criticize.  -------------------- Wow. 1,000 posts. I miss you all now that I'm in boarding school! ;_; |
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Posted: 25th June 2004 00:16
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Her right boob is still a bit off, and she has alien fingers. Also I think her eyes may be a little high on her head. Other than that it looks pretty good.
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Posted: 25th June 2004 01:09
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nice one figgy. the fingers are a bit off. other than that, it's great.
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Posted: 25th June 2004 01:37
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What they said. She has this peculiar stare, too...
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Post #49146
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Posted: 25th June 2004 02:00
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Her hips are waaaay too narrow. Women have hips that are as wide as their shoulders. Look up some pictures of women, or check out women in your area, to see what I mean. You may also want to lower her shoulders, as it looks like she's shrugging.
Arms can be longer, her elbows should be at her waist, and her knees are too low (thighs should not be longer than calves). Looks okay otherwise, I know these are hard to do :-) -------------------- I had an old signature. Now I've changed it. |
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Post #49148
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Posted: 25th June 2004 02:33
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Yes, the shoulders are a bit high, the hips and thighs are too small, and her feet are a little to thick around the middle.
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