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OK, here's the spear/lance used by Edgar/Mog. Feel free to bash it's crappiness/badness as much as you wish/want. I'm getting crazy/demented.

Seriously, though, all questions and comments are appreciated.

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Wow. 1,000 posts.

I miss you all now that I'm in boarding school! ;_;

well the design isn't half bad. The gem at the center of the blades could use a little work. Try and make it look shiny, that always makes gems and such look cool.

Also when drawing weapons and mechanical stuff its a good idea to use a ruler or something to make measurements and keep the lines straight. The solid straight lines help it to look more like a piece of metal.

Is that what the Trident looks like or is that just your interpretation? I don't remember.

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It's just my interpretation. I'm not really well versed in drawing shininity (is that a word?), but I'll try on my next submission. The gem isn't my favorite part of it, either. About using a ruler, to do the original lines, I had a ruler, but I was bored and tired when I finished this, and I couldn't find me a ruler, so I did it freehand. Meh.

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Wow. 1,000 posts.

I miss you all now that I'm in boarding school! ;_;

You could use some practise in making smoother lines, but otherwis I've nothing to criticise.

A great job it is!

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