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Could you clarify all of the names that you used? the Sayitroyey thing, the Y'Tyihy'yu thing, and the Reshand thing? something like that. i think that the first one is the name of the planet, the second one, a house design, anf the third, i completely lost. Basically all the names that weren't in the game, besides the characters, and the mining facility Shedidarah. what are the places that you named?!?!

You are right about the first one. Sayitheren is the name of the planet. And the mining base is Shedairah.

However I am unclear on the other two you are mentioning. Could you maybe copy a sentence that uses them? Also, what else are you curious to know?

Also, how are my characters 'too realistic'?

Here are waht confused me:

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The majority of the first floor appeared to be one large training room. The ceiling hung low on the room’s periphery, giving the feel of a standard one-story building. In the center of the room the ceiling was raised up. Green marble pillars that were mainly cylindrical save for their square bases stretched up to the low ceiling just before the point where it shifted up. A similar gray marble made up the room’s floor, and some large dark red carpets were laid about on its center. Cushioned benches lined the walls, and a few tables and chairs were placed in front of them. A chandelier much like the ones I’d seen the day before in Figaro Castle’s entrance hall hung down from the raised-up part of the ceiling, while less fancy light fixtures hung from the ceiling’s lowered parts. The brown painted walls held a number of framed pictures. Folding blinds served as curtains over the windows. Taking in all the elements of the structure simply reinforced the conclusion I’d arrived at already just from seeing the dojo’s exterior design.

The place was modeled much after traditional Jrysthovuhn architecture.

You’ve never heard of Jrysthovuh? Well I can’t say I really blame you. It’s not exactly a place of common knowledge. Given their history, it only makes sense that they’d cautiously seal themselves away from the rest of the world. Not that they were totally reclusive. They’d often leave their own territory and visit the many places outside their domain, and they even had a few of their products sold by merchants of other towns. I think their most well-known and often-peddled creation was some form of ninja weapon, edges or scrolls. I didn’t recall specifically what they were.

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I took his hulking paw. “Terra saved you and then you save my brother.” His words could mean just one thing in regards to his identity. “Sabin?” I asked, though I knew the answer before he nodded. “That’s me. Sabin Rene Figaro, fellow Returner and friend of Terra’s. I’m also her blitz teacher.”“The blitz?” I said with a small hint of recognition as Terra walked up beside him.“You study it too?” He asked.“Well, sort of. I am more familiar with the metal aspect than the physical one.” It was true. I only knew bits and pieces about the blitz art. I obviously knew more about the Ts’aosra’iy. Than again, the Ts’aosra’iy makes references to the blitz more than a few times. “Well now that you’ve had you little moments of fame, what are you going to do next?” Terra asked, as if she was thinking of something, most likely introducing me to the rest her Returner crew. There would be a time for that.

Also, Raqnger 51 those two posts were about completely different subjects. its like trying to write a one paragraph essay about donuts, and then going off topic to video games. it's just like that only in this case in would my art opinions, and my story confusions. but sorry anyway. I also roflmaool (Rofl-lmao-lol) at FUCKOPU!! as i reread the story. could you also clarify the ts'aorsa thing. reshend/jrysthovuh? not too different, especially after watching Naruto Rasengan that weapon guy who had lost to Gaara. that was last episode of Naruto first series. not really a spoiler as it had been out for a year now. as in oct 2006 japan. us will come out 2009, probably. sorry about getting off topic, its just that i love naruto ^-^ (my youtube account is jiinchurikiNaruto0 or jinchuurikiNaruto0... don't remember. i love naruto the anime... and Hyuuga Hinata...
also, do you mean "Mental", not "metal" for the blitz aspect thing.
the character are realistic becasue i believe if thuer past had happened, they would turn out this way, and act like this. i can just imagine this actually taking place if you take out the ff6-ish stuff and replace it, like the monster with a tank, the humanoid monster with a guy with knives and calver plate, and the beige moth with a tribesmen wiht a dartgun. and kefka and gesthal as powercrazy napoelans, and hitlers. in oppoosite respectve order as napolean/gesthal and kefka/hitler. it is all really beleivable it is actually kinda creepy...
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Sorry for such long post... also what is the warn thing wuith 5 bars and what does 20% mean? i think i should be scared... not really sure. scared anyway...

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nevermind. i read the forum rules, becasue i have finished my homework! got to go to my grandpa's birthday, my mom and stepdad's anninvesery, and my brithday, party at this resteurant soon. so i may not be able to respond tonight. edited on the 21st

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Quote (Frozen_Aura @ 21st October 2007 04:10)

Okay,

To answer your questions, Jrysthovuh

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is a place of some sorts.

Now for the Ts'aosroa'iy, you'll just have to wait and see

As far as reshend goes, I have no recollection of that one. It must have been a typo.

And yes, I do mean 'mental' for the blitz, as in mental concentration.

no reshend is what i thought jryshovah was called becasue i had watched naruto use rasengan, so i got confused... so would some other people in my place... i don't say you because i don't know you and you might have perfect recall and i wouldn't want to offend you...
[COMPLAIN][WHINE]I don't want to want to wait... post soon![/WHINE][/COMPLAIN] roflmaool

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Gripping stuff. Good blend of action and dramatic scenes, and the original characters are intresting. That end of the chapter was a nice reveal IMO.

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"The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here..."
-Abraham Lincoln, prior to the discovery of Irony.

Brilliant! The plot grows ever more intricate

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It's an illusion, and you're in-between.
Don't you be tarot-fied,
It's just alot of nothing, so what can it mean?
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Sins exist only for people who are on the Way or approaching the Way

You could make a novel out of this, and I would buy it! By God, you are an even greater author than JK Rowling! This is amazing! Is it possible to do a fanfiction of a fanfction of a game? I would much rather make a fanfic of your story, than to make one of just ffvi. Your writing is amazing!

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Hmm... Interesting so far. I feel for the girl. I have read that being raped is one of the most mind-scarring things possible. So I'm glad that Qaurjaeda punished him. It was a long chapter... But, I don't really get what happened when Sdalsya clenched her hands and when she opened them, her palms were bloody (This was pre-slaughter). Also, I'm glad Ruqojjen succeeded this time in freeing and saving the people. But could you explain this a little bit better?

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Normally, I’d be able to keep up with the others. My augmentation gave me enhanced speed and agility, and I was physically healthy for a sixteen-year-old girl. But I had the lowest stamina of our group. I was already tired from both the early morning wake-up and our trek through the woods. Though my augments provided me with a very special tongue, enhanced durability, reflexes, and to a lesser extent physical strength, it did not increase two notable characteristics; my stamina and my breast size.

Augments... As in FFXII's Augments using the License Board? Could you explain this system a bit better?

at the stuff in bold

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I'm getting the idea that these leaks of information and characterisation on Ruqojjen and his group are foreshadowing the upcoming clash. They're becoming steadily more brutal, maybe just as bad as their supposed enemies. I can't help but wonder how much of what little we know of their supposed goals and ideals are lies.

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Been reading your fanfic for quite a while but haven't had the chance to comment. I'll try to be short.

I'm glad you're continuing this after that evil cliffhanger, not that I mind evilness, keep them coming.

I was skeptical about Leonard at first, well written ocs that play a large role in a history are hard to find, but you managed to do it; Leonard is part of the gang now, he just fits.

Concerning Terra, I noticed a change in her character, frankly I like her more this way. My favorite part of the whole thing is her yelling at Locke for acting overprotective (he had it well deserved in my humble opinion).

And Charise, she can keep up with Edgar quite well XD, I like her. Sarge is also among the notable ocs.

About this chapter, you captured and expanded Zozo very “nicely”. Oh and call me sick, but, Buck's severed arm tangled in the cord was an awesome detail.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, until now I don't know what the hell is going on... in a good way.

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good stuff Figaro[opera by Rossini]
I wish Figaro move near the edge of the desert.
One side desert the other plains and forest

Mog and the everyman jeweler
Narshe's Narshean does it for me[if we have Narshe music that would be nice]

whenever I think of FF6
I wanna envision the skies of endless clouds
fill with different airships,
fighting against all odds

those who posses Meteor and Ultima
are the Alpha and Omega

Setzer and Daryl are together



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