Posted: 22nd September 2007 22:18
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I'm starting out with Bartz as a Chemist:
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Posted: 23rd September 2007 01:14
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I dont know if it's just me or what... but his arms seem a little girlish.
And I dont know if its just me but his legs seem err stiff? And to me the gun seems a little big. But besides those I really like it, it looks like the chemist costume he has in game, good job. ![]() Oh, and I really like the face. -------------------- Kel'Thuzad: She is persistent. Reminds me of you, death knight. Arthas:Shut up you damned ghost. -Warcraft III Kel'thuzad comparing Arthas and Sylvanas Windrunner. |
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Posted: 23rd September 2007 11:23
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Not bad, but I pictured him a iittle more manly. In addition to his arms, I think his smile is somewhat feminine. On an un-related note, did FFV have guns?
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Posted: 23rd September 2007 17:40
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the weapon is questionable, as mentioned. he needs more muscle in his arms, that'll really make him look more manly. also, the bottom half of his body looks really stiff. bend the legs would help, and make him less thin.
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Posted: 23rd September 2007 20:18
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Quote (FabulousFreebird @ 23rd September 2007 06:23) On an un-related note, did FFV have guns? No it didn't, unless if you're playing the re-release in the Advance. Cannoneers are a featured job in that remake that allows you to buy "ammo" and mix it with other items (usually the items/scrolls Ninjas throw except for common weapons like Mythril Sword). But getting back on topic... Bartz's arms look scrawny, his leg muscles could be widened more to give it a more masculine look, and especially that smirk on his face. Other than that, it has good potential to be tweaked and turned into a much better sketch than it is now. |
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Posted: 23rd September 2007 23:50
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![]() So something like this? By the way, the gun is from the FFX-2 Alchemist. -------------------- And don't drive your car off a cliff like I did. Girl, no man is worth 10 points on your license. |
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Posted: 4th October 2007 22:27
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![]() Lenna as a Berserker. I'm disappointed in the way the wolf's head turned out and how she looks anorexic, but I like her face and her lower body stance, although I think something could've been done with a right leg. Still, I like this picture overall. -------------------- And don't drive your car off a cliff like I did. Girl, no man is worth 10 points on your license. |
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Posted: 4th October 2007 23:54
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The Lenna picture above has a lot of potential. I really think that if you put a little bit more time into it, it would look 10 times better. Some of the dimensions and angles appear to be a little off to me.
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Posted: 5th October 2007 05:53
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Why high heels? You know how hard it is to fight in those?
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Posted: 5th October 2007 07:22
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I agree, the berserker picture has a lot of potential.
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Posted: 6th October 2007 23:38
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Quote (SilverMaduin @ 5th October 2007 02:53) Why high heels? You know how hard it is to fight in those? Because they can be taken off and used as a b**cherang. ![]() -------------------- NEVER put salt in your eyes. |
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