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Posted: 15th August 2003 04:25
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I would definitely improve the misspelling, grammatical errors, and mistranslations; there are a lot of them. Have you seen the reports of the bar propositions? There are too many mistakes that it's not even funny. They were obviously in a rush to get it done. Some of the things they used are in real life. Very interesting stuff.
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Posted: 15th August 2003 05:11
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I got a good feeling!
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Posted: 15th August 2003 21:32
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Better script for propositions and possibly some differentiaition between descriptions.
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Posted: 19th August 2003 00:58
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How does someone make so many mistakes? I mean, damn, they are right there doing it. Don't they notice it at all?
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